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Our World/Habitats

I have saved some new links on our Delicious Bookmarks - be sure to take a look...there are some really cool videos. Click on Our World/Habitats above or on the picture below.

Holiday Recount by Akaash

In the holidays I went to Rainbow's End with my friends.  First my sister and I went on the go carts. My sister went so fast! Then we went on the Gold Rush. It went fast too and it was so scary. There were strange noises! Twenty minutes later we went on the log flume. It was scary because there was a talking frog. After the  log flume we watched a magic show and ate lunch. We had chicken express and it was yum. Fifteen minutes later  we went to Motion Master. It was new in 3D. It was scary and  I nearly flew off my chair because my chair was moving so fast. Then we went on the bumper cars and also the bumper boats.  They were both fun but I liked the bumper boats better. It was so cool at Rainbow's End.

A few days later  my sister, my dad and I went to the movies and watched Up. I had popcorn, ice cream and a drink which was yummy.  
I had a great holiday.

Hello Akaash,
Thank you for emailing me your holiday recount. Sounds like you had an exciting time at Rainbow's End....makes me jealous!!
Next time in your writing, pay attention to Capitals and full-stops. Also write a conclusion.
Well done.

Mrs Raman

Holiday Recount by Cee

In the Holiday I went to sleep over at my friend's house.
The first sleep-over was just a fun one and the second one was a birthday party.
My friend's name is Alyssa. I had a great time at the sleepover.

On Thursday of the first week of the holiday, I went to Rainbow's End.
It was fun going with my sister and my dad. We  went on lots and lots of rides. My favourite were all the rides I went on.
I had fun with my dad and my sister.

Nearly every day I went to dinner at Thai Restaurant. It was yummy!
I also went to the $2.00 shop many times. I had fun shopping for a long time. 

I went to the movies twice. I played arcade games at the movies. It was wonderful.

I  had the greatest holiday ever.
By Cee

 

Hello Cee,
Thank you for emailing me your Holiday Recount.
I really enjoyed reading your recount. I have proofread and edited it so there are a few changes.
I loved your paragraphing. Next time, use full-stops instead of exclamation marks.
Well done on an interesting and informative recount.
Mrs Raman

I am Akaash (aged 8)

I am a boy who enjoys playing computer-games
I wonder what the future holds
I hear the crashing noise of my computer games
I see the spaceships crashing in my computer game
I want to travel around the world
I am a boy who enjoys playing computer-games

I pretend to have a lot of money
I feel the wind rushing through my hair
I touch the bark on a tree
I worry about my family
I cry when people hurt me
I am a boy who enjoys playing computer-games

I understand the class treaty
I say "sh" to people who disturb the class
I dream about travelling around the world
I try to be the best in school
I hope to travel around the world someday
I am a boy who enjoys playing computer-games

I am Hudson

I am a boy who likes playing rugby

I wonder if the future is real

I hear people crying

I see people having fun outside

I want to be friendly


I am a boy who likes playing rugby

I pretend I am a famous rugby player

I feel a little grumpy

I touch my little puppy

I worry about my family

I cry when I get angry


I am a boy who likes playing rugby

I understand what my teacher is saying

I say stop it I don't like it

I dream about being a rugby player

I try hard with my writing

I hope that my family will be nice to me

I am a boy that likes playing rugby

Happy Term 3 Holidays

Just dropping in say hope you all are having a fabulous holiday. One week of rest and relaxation before we start school again.

Hope you are keeping yourselves busy, having fun while reading also. (Remember those cool links on Delicious Bookmarks).

Thanks for chatting on Mission Heights Online. Miss you all soooo much!

Mrs Raman